第一個發帖 Hello EveryOne
原帖子來自：http://www.accessroot.com/arteam/forums/index.php?showtopic=7821
一樓原帖子：
Hello EveryOne，I'm glad to see you~
I'm a Chinese student,and I want to study this technology！
I heard that the organization of ART, So I come....
But I do not understand English Language,so I can only rely on translation tools and communicate you！
I hope that you can successfully communicate with me,and help me please!
Thank you~~
安催指導：
1、 Hello everyone, glad to see you~
a) everyone就是這種寫法；省略I'm，更口語化一點，否則別扭了一些，寫成 Hello everyone, glad 2cu~ 就很炫了
2、 I'm a Chinese student, and want to learn this techniques
a) study通常指的學術研究，用在這里有點重，當然，如果你是這個意思，也可以用；technology泛指技術，語意層次和knowlege差不多，所以使用程度更重的techniques
3、 I've heard that the organization of ART, so I come here....
a) I've 使用完成時態；organization貌似特別正式，有點讓ART受寵若驚啊，哈哈，當然也是可以用的；here是一定要加的。
4、 But I do not understand English, so I can only rely on translation tools to communicate with you!
a) 去掉Language；and變為to
5、 I hope that you can successfully communicate with me, and help me please! (I hope that we can happily communicate with each other.外國不喜歡沒有自信的人。)
a) 沒有什么太大的問題，只是貌似前半句可能要使用虛擬語氣
二樓Nieylana帖子原文
If RE is what you want to learn, you have indeed come to the right place.
Here you will find an almost limitless amount of knowledge to learn.
We have IMHO some of the most talented right here. And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others.
But again, welcome to ARTeam forums. Enjoy your stay.
嫂子指導：
6、 If RE is what you want to learn, you have indeed come to the right place.
if 從句，indeed 確實的意思。Have come 是現在完成時態--- 形式是主語+have+動詞的過去分詞。
7、 Here you will find an almost limitless amount of knowledge to learn.
在這你能夠發現很多值得學習的知識。Limit 是限制的意思，less 是否定后綴。例如，homeless,就是無家可歸的意思。
8、 We have IMHO some of the most talented right here. And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others.
Define sth as ….把什么定義為。。。。
9、 But again, welcome to ARTeam forums. Enjoy your stay.
Enjoy ….Enjoy yourself.
三樓帖子原文：
RE are Reverse Engineering mean?
If yes, then I would not come to the wrong places ~~~, gaga~~~~
I very much agree with you said that sentence : "And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others!"
If I know how things will definitely share the U.S.!
I'm using Google translation tools,So,There will certainly be a lot of the content of a syntax error!
I came here another reason for this is that I want to learn about English,
Also requests the understanding！
安催指導：
10、 RE means Reverse Engineering?
a) 這個不用解釋太多，翻譯工具的拙劣是一眼就可以看出來的)
11、 If yes, then I have not come to the wrong places ~~~, gaga~~~~
a) 完成時態
12、 I agree with you very much when you are saying "And i define talent as having the knowledge AND the ability/willingness to teach others!"
a) 注意副詞very much的位置；（ I totally[完全] agree with you when you ….
b) agree sb. when sb. is saying "..."是常見的一種語句
13、 If I know how things will definitely share the U.S.!
a) 沒有看懂是怎么回事~~~oops
14、 I'm using Google translation tools,So,There will certainly be a lot of syntax errors of the content!
a) 復數
15、 I came here for another reason that I want to learn English,
a) 調整語序
16、 Also requests understanding!
a) 不需要the
帖子原文：
QUOTE (XLI @ Feb 20 2009, 11:22 AM)
Welcome
Do u speak traditional Chinese?
Yes,I do`~
I have been talking about Chinese language and writing Chinese characters from my childhood!
This is my first time on the other countries of the BBS and Writing The English language !
I hope you do not joke my English，and Tell me what I had said in the grammar error!
I will do my best to learn English language for communicate with the U.S.
Thanks again~
安催指導：
17、 I have been speeking Chinese and writing Chinese characters from my childhood!
a) speek Chinese (會說某種語言用speak+語言)
18、 This is my first time on BBS of the other countries and Writing English!
a) BBS of the other countries, 或者可以寫作foreign BBS
19、 I hope you do not joke on my English，and Tell me what's wrong in the sentence!
If I make some mistakes, please tell me. Thank you.
20、 I will do my best to learn English to communicate with the Americans.
安催注：我說的不一定對的，不要盲目相信；當然如果說錯什么，我一定不是惡意的。:)